Blue Fairy

very mysterious prologue. cant wait to read more :D

i love it it's really good. you have described the characters well and brought them to life. well done :D

this is hilarious. hehehehhehehehehehehe *laughs some more it was great good work :D

lol you didn't insult me. I read it back through and seperated it into more paragraphs. It is easier to read now. thanks.

awww thats so sweet. I loved it. You must be lucky. :D Fairy

i have now edited and improved my story with the critque. thank you. please keep reviewing it :) Fairy

thanks midnight the sentence about them moving To london: i haven't made it very clear but I meant there mum moved to London so they would have lived there for ...

hi extraterrestial welcome I would review your first story but where is it? hope you get it posted soon Fairy :)

Thanks fishr I think what you have said will really improve my story. some of the things in wrote don't sound right i agree. I think i will definietly add ...